Monday, August 20, 2012

Moified Third Paragraph


Ambrose Bierce's stories convey truth mixed with fiction, amongst the cynicism. For example, One of the Missing uses the name of Brigadier General William Tecumseh Sherman (General Sherman) and depicts the "Confederate retreat"[1] through the fictional character of Private Jerome Searing, who is an "orderly"[2] for Sherman's army. The story also depicts the "miles of trenchlines"[3] which it appears Bierce described as "A line of earthworks"[4] and "little banks of earth scooped out of the slight depression"[5]. Of course, this would only be genuine if Union soldiers had taken over the Confederate trenches. "Searing pushed forward across the line of abandoned pits"[6] gives us evidence to show that this is likely true. It appears that the Atlanta Campaign is presented as a sort of building site as well as a battlefield. His stories show how genuine historical settings and characters can be portrayed in fiction.



[1] Geologic Origins of Kennesaw Mountain - ?
[2] Ambrose Gwinnett Bierce, One of the Missing, http://www.ambrosebierce.org/main.html
[3]Angela Tooley, The Dallas Road Community and the Battle of Kennesaw Mountain,  National Park Service U.S. Department of the Interior  Kennesaw Mountain National Battlefield Park, Experience Your America™
[4] One of the Missing
[5] One of the Missing
[6] One of the Missing


Added the underlined sentence to make my "point more clearly". I am unsure if I should write this paragraph.

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