Saturday, August 18, 2012

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From this:

Ambrose Bierce's stories convey truth mixed with fiction. For example, One of the Missing uses the name of Brigadier General William Tecumseh Sherman (General Sherman) and depicts the "Confederate retreat"[1]through the fictional character of Private Jerome Searing, who is an "orderly"[2]for Sherman's army. The story also depicts the "miles of trenchlines"[3]which it appears Bierce described as "A line of earthworks"[4]and "little banks of earth scooped out of the slight depression"[5]. Of course, this would only be true if Union soldiers had taken over the Confederate trenches. It seems likely. It appears that the Atlanta Campaign is presented as a sort of building site as well as a battlefield.
To this:
Ambrose Bierce's stories convey truth mixed with fiction. For example, One of the Missing uses the name of Brigadier General William Tecumseh Sherman (General Sherman) and depicts the "Confederate retreat"[1] through the fictional character of Private Jerome Searing, who is an "orderly"[2] for Sherman's army. The story also depicts the "miles of trenchlines"[3] which it appears Bierce described as "A line of earthworks"[4] and "little banks of earth scooped out of the slight depression"[5]. Of course, this would only be genuine if Union soldiers had taken over the Confederate trenches. "Searing pushed forward across the line of abandoned pits"[6] gives us evidence to show that this is likely true. It appears that the Atlanta Campaign is presented as a sort of building site as well as a battlefield.



[1] Geologic Origins of Kennesaw Mountain - ?
[2] Ambrose Gwinnett Bierce, One of the Missing, http://www.ambrosebierce.org/main.html
[3]Angela Tooley, The Dallas Road Community and the Battle of Kennesaw Mountain,  National Park Service U.S. Department of the Interior  Kennesaw Mountain National Battlefield Park, Experience Your America™
[4] One of the Missing
[5] One of the Missing
[6] One of the Missing

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